vish wrote: If every country was some form of marine life, Canada would be a large whale.

tommydski wrote: I figured it was maybe the size of wales.

projectMalamute wrote:I've changed my mind, the wording is better as is.

Rick Reuben wrote:

rachel2025 wrote:Electrical Audio is a two-studio complex in Chicago, owned by Steve Albini.

This is the best. I also would object to the phrase 'two-studio complex'. EA is a studio with two live rooms and two control rooms, but it is simply a 'studio complex'. Many studios have multiple rooms, but all the rooms are under the umbrella of a single studio.

Does every individual room count as a separate studio? I don't think so. If your mechanic has six bays, does he have six garages?

Also, this sentence is faulty:

We are also in the process of putting all of our equipment up for you to look at and read about.

The actual equipment is not being 'put up'. You can't put equipment on a computer screen. I would put the whole thing in proper tense, and write:

If you want to see photos and details of our equipment, go here.

There's no reason to tell visitors that you're in the process of doing something. Whatever exists is what they get.

burun wrote:

Photoshopping whilst tired: not a good idea. I know I can do better.

Germ War wrote:(post containing one-upsmanship of all other posts in this thread contained here)

DrAwkward wrote:

Germ War wrote:(post containing one-upsmanship of all other posts in this thread contained here)

Wow.

By alluding to the fact that everyone else is trying to one-up each other, but striking a detached pose by not actually composing a one-upping post, you have attempted to one-up everyone. That's so meta!